THE CURSE OF MILA GOJSALIĆ is a high-stakes retelling of two prominent Slavic myths—the mysterious death of King Zvonimir and the legend of Croatian heroine Mila Gojsalić.
#questpit #OS #editorsguide #A #F
THE LAST HOUSEWIFE x A HISTORY OF WILD PLACES
To protect her sister, Ivy rises in the ranks of her pious island community. Duty hides the cruel truth behind salvation. When faith bleeds, what will Ivy sacrifice?
#questpit #W #A #T
I'm trying to climb a mountain called a first draft but I keep getting lost! I've heard that some manuscripts are harder than others, but this one's making me WORK!
#CRPBees 🐝 #CampRevPit
It’s a mess alright 😂
the best laid plans...
#Unhingedpit
AITA I (29F) went to my childhood BFF's wedding to let the groom know we have a kid together. Now he's mad at me (?) for not telling him about the kid, and the bride is dead, and everyone thinks I did it?? AITA? My only crime is loving him too much 💔
#UnhingedPit
Types of story conflict:
Internal - character's opposing mental/emotional needs
External - one character’s needs keeps another character from their own
Social - character needs=socially unacceptable in some way
Environmental - something in setting stops character from reaching goal
#revpit
bsky.app/profile/mira... - Here you go!
here I go adding yet another book to my TBR 😅
I did! Thanks 💕
Thanks for the answer!
What advice would you give a new writer attempting multi-POV to ensure a cohesive and effective narrative?
Asking as someone who wrote a multi-POV, is pretty sure she didn't pull it off, and is now looking for an Extreme Makeover: Manuscript Edition 😅
IN MY DREAMS I HOLD A KNIFE x THE UNWEDDING
Lights out. Bride dead
Six friends, bound by secrets and a lifetime of betrayals, are trapped in a remote chateau by a raging storm. A weekend of celebration turns into a desperate hunt for the killer in their midst
#popuppita #luckypit #popuppit
ahh this makes the data nerd in me so happy! 😍
it's done! now we wait some more
A newspaper article from the "Linxvile Times" The Notorious Assassin Killed Empress Pixylian Left-side: The Notorious Assassin, Quill, Strikes Again! The gold-blooded, chosen Empress was found dead last night at the Imperial Palace of Linxvile City. Firsthand witnesses told Linxvile Times that the nape of Empress Pixylian’s neck was covered in black veins, the mark of the notorious assassin, Quill. The Linxvile Empress is survived by Sy, her headstrong & disabled ex-GF. Unbeknownst to Sy, she has inherited from the Empress the key to the immense divine power that a dysfunctional family of gods covets to rule the world. Sources say that the gods will stop at nothing to possess Sy, making her their eternal slave, vessel, and weapon against the mortals. Sources believe Sy is way in over her head! Sy has no intention of saving the universe. When asked for comments, She said, “Thanks, but NO!” Right-side: Image of the empress. The last Linxvile Empress was assassinated in the palace Kezer’n Pixylian Figra vun Unthece was found dead last night with black veins at the nape of her neck. Pixylian was the last Empress (Kezer’n) in the vun Unthece matrilineal line. The future of the empire is unclear. Meanwhile, the Empress’s evil uncle is believed to be preparing for his coronation as the ink on this page is drying!
The map of planet Hymber’s dark hemispheroid where the majority of the high fantasy novel I #amquerying is set within my quirky fantasy universe called #Wisteraverse.
MC’s dating profile: - Sy Katz (F), 24 - Bisexual Woman - Engineer of Steam Machines My ex-GF claims that I have “terrible taste in men” who sell me out for their own gain, but the joke is on her because she betrayed me too! I’m a proud Bipolar, Disabled, Neurodivergent, Bisexual, Woman of Color. So deal with it!
🗡️When the chosen Empress is assassinated, her disabled & gutsy ex-GF must face a dysfunctional family of gods or submit to fulfilling the chosen’s grim fate as the gods' eternal slave & weapon against mortals
❤️Forbidden Love
🌶️Hot Banter, Dark Humor
🫂FoundFamily
🏳️🌈 #LGBT #BIPOC #Dis #Own
#WSPitQ #F #A
On Zephyr Isle, loyalty to the Father is law. When Ivy finds a body hung on holy ground she must choose: rule, or die.
#WSPit #WSPitW #T #A
Introducing my new adult thriller DAUGHTER OF ZEPHYR:
⛈️ An isolated island covered in mist
🙏 A leader who demands unwavering loyalty
🗡️ A community where loyalty is a fragile shield
🔥 A young woman whose faith won't protect her from the darkness
#QuestPit #T #WIP #Agentsguide
so I just found out about #MiseryPit today 👉👈
Leaving this here for any #litagent who's lurking today
Lights out. Bride dead.
THE UNWEDDING X THE HUNTING PARTY
Lights out. Bride Dead.
Six friends, bound by secrets and a lifetime of betrayals, are trapped in a remote chateau by a raging storm. A weekend celebration turns into a desperate hunt for the killer in their midst
#2025pit #Q #agentsguide
THE UNWEDDING X THE HUNTING PARTY
Lights out. Bride Dead.
Six friends, bound by secrets and a lifetime of betrayals, are trapped in a remote chateau by a raging storm. A weekend celebration turns into a desperate hunt for the killer in their midst
#2025pit #Q #agentsguide
#litagents I'm a beta for this book and I cannot recommend it enough. It takes you on a ride that's equal parts weird, thought-provoking, and delightful. I laughed out loud. I cried. I was grossed out. And through all of that, the puppets start a totalitarian government. What else can you ask for?
Feedback from agents:
- I was blown away by your writing. Truly.
- I really enjoyed the pace of your writing and the alternating points of view. Your short chapters were propulsive
- I loved the very atmospheric setting, the spikiness of the writing and the distinct voice of each POV
#youdeservepIt
An image of a man standing behind a woman with his hand tucked into the front of her pants. Text box: "An Agent's Guide to "Everything I Once Had."
Image is of a tattooed man's hand holding a woman's. Text box reads: "Pitch: Remington Kincade hated Daphne McKinsey from the moment they met. She’d been dating his lifelong best friend, Jax, off and on for three years, so instead of avoiding each other, he spent every forced minute together reminding her just how much of an ass he could be. When Jax and Daphne call it quits for good, Remy and Daphne confess their mutual lust, drafting a sex contract so Remy can get her out of his system and Daphne can move on from her ex. To keep anyone from discovering their secret, they continue to publicly feud as they privately fall in love, but the truth has a way of coming out, and when it does, Daphne learns Remy’s been keeping a much darker secret. Now, she must decide whether to forgive his mistakes and keep him close or push him away for good."
Image is of a man's tattooed hand gripping the neck of a blonde woman. Text box reads: Themes & Tropes: Dark Contemporary Romance (91,000 words) Comedic banter Enemies to Lovers Forbidden Romance Opposites Attract Fake Hating High Spice Character development Redemption Arc Morally Grey Contract Theme PLOT TWIST
Image shows a silhouette of a man and woman in front of a blazing fire. Text Box reads "Comps" with images of the cover art for Emily McIntire's Hooked, Ana Huang's Twisted Hate and Elle Kennedy’s Good Girl Complex
I wasn’t going to participate but throwing this out there just in case.
#Litagents & #Editors, here is my #AgentGuide to EVERYTHING I ONCE HAD, a 90k enemies to lovers dark contemporary romance with high spice and all the banter. 🔥
#YouDeservePit #Q #A #R
THE UNWEDDING X THE HUNTING PARTY
Lights out. Bride Dead.
Six friends, bound by secrets and a lifetime of betrayals, are trapped in a remote chateau by a raging storm. A weekend celebration turns into a desperate hunt for the killer in their midst
#youdeservepIt #Q #agentsguide
I feel called out 😂
Celebrating the *checks notes* 20th full request for this book today 🤯
