Kit Barry

<Donkey> me! me! Oh pick me! </Donkey>

You have to think about the purpose of deviation from "proper" use: line break & odd punctuation/grammar should be trying to communicate something (time, space, weight)...if it's not, or it's not supporting the meaning you're after, that's when it needs the edit. Each poem will have it's own rules

Can a book run Doom? A while ago, I got excited about Ace of Aces, a two-player First World War dogfight in a pair of books, and the extremely cool math that makes it possible. I’ve been thinking about this game a lot.…

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