<Donkey> me! me! Oh pick me! </Donkey>
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<Donkey> me! me! Oh pick me! </Donkey>
You have to think about the purpose of deviation from "proper" use: line break & odd punctuation/grammar should be trying to communicate something (time, space, weight)...if it's not, or it's not supporting the meaning you're after, that's when it needs the edit. Each poem will have it's own rules